Spencer, This is a good word map that describes various aspects of the Sudanese culture. I like the way you included some quotes about the definition of culture, and that you include some statistics about the language and religion in Sudan. Your quotes from the novel are good, but could be explained in some detail - tell us where in the novel this was happening, analyse what he meant, etc. This could either be done within the wordmap or in your description of the wordmap on your blog post. Overall, what do these things tell us about the world that Jal is growing up in? Making some type of overarching comment about this question will make your word map more effective. Good work!
Spencer,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good word map that describes various aspects of the Sudanese culture. I like the way you included some quotes about the definition of culture, and that you include some statistics about the language and religion in Sudan. Your quotes from the novel are good, but could be explained in some detail - tell us where in the novel this was happening, analyse what he meant, etc. This could either be done within the wordmap or in your description of the wordmap on your blog post. Overall, what do these things tell us about the world that Jal is growing up in? Making some type of overarching comment about this question will make your word map more effective. Good work!